Tuesday, November 26, 2024
New Book Released!
Saturday, November 23, 2024
Behind the Scenes of "Ginger & Klaus: Of Mice and Love" and "Ginger & Klaus: A Brittle Liberty"
Hello, family, fans, and friends!
With the successful release of "Ginger & Klaus: A Brittle Liberty" back in July and the upcoming release of "Ginger & Klaus: A Hitch in the Harvest," I thought it would be fun to share some facts about the second and third books. I believe that some of these are interesting, some are funny, and some are just plain weird. Here we go!
I. Ginger & Klaus: Of Mice and Love
- The book's subtitle was nearly "The Elusive Valentine." I felt that was a little too magniloquent, so I spent some time thinking of an alternative subtitle. At the time, my wife was reading "Of Mice and Men" by John Steinbeck. I thought, "Well, my book is about mice and Ginger's love for one mouse in particular...." I decided to go with "Of Mice and Love," as the reference to such a famous work also felt right. Plus, I knew that Ginger's love would not be reciprocated in the end, whereas Klaus's and Ingrid's love for each other is mutual.
- Originally, I planned for Molasses to fall in love with Agapa. I changed my mind for two reasons: one, because I believed that the plot would become spread too thin; two, because I liked the idea of Agapa being more of a personification of love and the catalyst for others to fall in love, rather than being one who could find romantic love herself.
- Most of the stories I write are pretty well outlined in advance, but the beginning of chapter two--in which Ginger and Molasses lead the other Cookies of Theo in repairing a bridge--came to me spontaneously. This was a major decision for me to execute, because I could either continue the micro-view of Ginger, Molasses, and Klaus, or I could expand into a macro-view of the other cookies. My idea from the beginning has been to write seven books in this series, and I knew that sticking to the micro-view was not feasible. We need to see how other cookies relate to Mr. Theo in the long run. I hope to explore certain themes and storylines involving these other cookies in the future. Are all of them truly Cookies of Theo? Are some among them impostors? Maybe there are some who think they are following Mr. Theo, but they end up turning away, toward their own selfish desires! I think including other cookies opens up many opportunities.
- I juggled the idea of having Agapa sacrifice herself in the almond orchard at the end of the book. This did not sit right with me, as Agapa was a new character, she seems to be a solid companion for Molasses, and because I had an inkling of an idea that she would one day cause Ginger to fall in love with the right individual (spoilers, kind of, maybe).
- This book was much more challenging to write than "A Christmas Adventure," and not only due to its greater length. In "A Christmas Adventure," Ginger goes on a quest to stop her brother. The townspeople are at risk if she does not stop him. She has a clear enemy and a clear goal, and the stakes are high. In "Of Mice and Love," there is a little more nuance: the greatest enemy of the story is not Shol or Limerence, but Ginger's own unholy desires; the goal is to reach a location before sundown; only the lives of three mice are on the line. I also had to convincingly show the growth of Ginger's affection for Klaus in just five chapters!
- King Shol was named thus for two reasons: "Shol" is a minimal pair with "Saul," the corrupt king of Israel immediately preceding David; and "Shol" sounds a lot like the Hebrew "sheol," which is used to refer to "death" or "the grave."
- Agapa was named thus because of the Greek work "agape," which means "love." I ended it with the letter "a" to give the word a more feminine slant.
- Limerence was named thus because of the word's definition in Collins Dictionary: "a state of mind resulting from romantic attraction, characterized by feelings of euphoria, the desire to have one's feelings reciprocated...." Of course, this is Ginger's great struggle in the book. https://www.collinsdictionary.com/us/dictionary/english/limerence#google_vignette
- In the first book, I had not given names or personalities to any cookies besides Ginger and Molasses (Reinhard the reindeer cookie also makes an appearance, but he was unnamed at the time). Therefore, I originally portrayed the two cookies who help Molasses lift the window as "gingerbread men." I decided later that I wanted these two "generals" who had served Molasses to be brother and sister, and to have the names "Sugar" and "Clove." The idea was for them to be living examples of what Ginger and Molasses would have looked like had they never been redeemed by Mr. Theo. Sugar and Clove are "shadow images" of Ginger and Molasses and warnings to them against walking down the wrong path.
- My original plan was to ramp up the action in chapter 4 by having an epic battle take place. While Ginger, Klaus, Molasses, and Agapa were traveling, they were going to take a rest in a bare area and start a small campfire to keep warm. Several of King Shol's mice followers were going to jump out from the grass or bushes and attack them. Molasses was going to fly into a rage and start bashing mice left and right with his mace, and Ginger was going to remind him of his new nature and the dangers of his old life. As I went into chapter four, however, it did not seem logical for King Shol to lure Klaus to a yard and also command his followers to kill Klaus on the road. I figured that Shol would prefer Klaus to waste away or be made a spectacle for his insurrection. Also, I thought it a better idea to highlight Ginger's shortcomings this time around as opposed to Molasses's flaws; having Molasses go berserk and be chided by Ginger would not help accomplish that goal. Instead, I flipped my original idea on its head and had Molasses chide Ginger for falling in love with Klaus. I also decided that it was better to revisit the sneaky Cupid cookie who had attacked Ginger at the end of chapter 1, thereby reinforcing this as a Valentine's Day story and giving the new villain a face and a name.
The book was almost titled “A Brittle Independence,” but I thought the tongue twister of “A Brittle Liberty” was too much fun to pass up. Also, the words “brittle” and “liberty” are almost anagrams!
I had an inner debate as to whether Sugar or Clove would die at the end. I felt that Clove was a bit more unhinged, and that he would be a more dangerous antagonist in the future if his sister were to be killed, so I decided that it would be best for Sugar to die. I also have other ideas with Clove and how Molasses relates to him.
In 2019, singer and songwriter Marty Sampson—former singer of Hillsong, a band I was once very much obsessed with—announced his apostasy on social media. I was shocked, as he had been something of an idol to me for many years, and I even strove to match his singing prowess. It is because of this man’s apostasy that I had the gingerbread man, Crumble, join Frostina in rebelling against Molasses and rejecting his leadership. In book two, Crumble had shared a tale that he had learned to sing songs to Mr. Theo by listening to the birds on Mount Oniz. In “A Brittle Liberty,” it is stated that Crumble taught songs of praise to his fellow cookies. Molasses asks himself something along the lines of, “If someone like Crumble could fall, who is exempt from that danger?”
Weeks before I had finished the book, I knew that Ginger and Klaus would not escape until the final chapter. It was important for me to relay the message that things often don’t happen according to our timing or our plan. There are even times in life when it appears that a door has opened—when our gumdrop button keeps the cell door from closing all the way, and we think that the coast is clear and that the time of waiting is over—and we “jump the gun” and dash out of our cell…only to find that there is more waiting to do.
In my original outline of the book, Limerence was going to be killed at the end of chapter two. Although having the story unfold this way would not have had an immense impact on the ending, I also wanted to plant seeds for future stories. One of the ideas I wanted to tap into early on was, “Are all of the cookies on Mount Oniz truly obedient to Mr. Theo?” Spoiler alert: no. There needed to be something that happened that would create a schism between some of the cookies and serve as the catalyst for some cookies to turn away from the faith. I believed that Molasses making the unilateral decision to release Limerence was a good way to go about this. I also have some significant plans for Limerence himself.
In the first draft of chapter one, Clove used a power screwdriver to drill a hole in Ginger’s arm. This felt a bit off and a bit too violent, but I was going to keep it in until I came to the end of chapter four. I thought that it would be perfect if the Colony Behind the Cabinets captured Clove and found Klaus’s knife on him, and that the knife was returned to Klaus at the end of the book. I returned to chapter one and swapped the screwdriver for the knife.
Thursday, June 20, 2024
Slower Than Molasses Update
Thursday, February 15, 2024
February Flash Fiction: Rivlo and the Attack on Armus Village
Rivlo was too young to understand much of anything, but he understood fear. At least, he had always thought he understood fear. Now that the creatures had burst into town--their skin slick, their tails sharp, and their swords sharper--he realized that there were levels of fear, and he was terrified. He could see them skulking about outside his hide-covered bedroom window, some of them forcing their way into homes and seeking out the inhabitants within, and others pursuing the retreating villagers until they were out of sight. There were a couple of times when he saw a man or woman trip in their flight, and one of the ugly fiends came upon them and lifted a thirsty blade--but he refused to witness the outcome, shutting his eyes and clapping his hands over his ears. He knew those people were dead now; there was no need to confirm it. The attackers desired extermination, not friendship.
But why did the Armian people have to suffer? They had kept to themselves for the past one hundred years, at least, most of them working as patrolmen in the northern Shadow Hills, or as fishermen, or as farmers. Rivlo's neighbors were all friendly, honest people. Even the mayor, whom half the town seemed to hate and the other half seemed to love, was a nice man who had never had much interest in connecting Armus with the rest of the world. This attack seemed so very random. Random and sudden. The valley beyond town was expansive and sprinkled with individual farms; if the fiends wanted land or property so badly, there was plenty to be had in every direction. So why Armus Village, and why now? It was just one more thing Rivlo's young mind could not comprehend.
His father, mother, and younger sister were there in his bedroom with him. They had dragged the kitchen table into the room (they were now hiding under it) and had used a second table to keep the door closed. It would be of little use, Rivlo knew. The blades of the enemies were held by strong arms and were capable of breaking down doors in just a few hits. Even if they were somehow thwarted by the table, it was probable that they would produce some kind of fire-wreathed weapon to set the house ablaze. He could already smell the smoke of other homes that had met such a fate.
He ignored the whispered demands of his parents to join them beneath the table, and he peered out his window at a tavern off to the right. The sound of shouting came from within the building; it was a mixture of garbled voices, and he could not make out a single word. There was a woman, or maybe it was just a girl, protesting and arguing and threatening. The voices--belonging to the evil creatures, no doubt--retorted with must have been jeering and teasing. He did not know what the girl was saying, but in her voice was a fiery courage that filled him with strength. If he did not know any better, he would say that her voice was laced with magic, like one of those sorceresses he had heard about in the old stories. Or maybe she was just that brave.
The loud bang at the front door knocked him free of his trance. The beasts had reached his house at last. In half a minute they would wreck through the living room, and a few seconds later they would be outside the bedroom door. He looked across the room at his family, and the terror filled him again, a terror that should have driven him over the floorboards and into his mother's arms. But he had gone from a trance to a stasis. If he made even the slightest move, a floorboard could creak and alert the creatures to his location. He felt ashamed. If only he had possessed the courage of that girl in the tavern. If only he could rush out into the living room and bark out orders for his foes to turn away and find someone else to bother. But his fear was reaching his limit, and he knew he could do nothing. He would just remain where he was, and he would be quiet, and he would not even breathe, and he would pray for his family to be spared from the toll of the numbered dead.
It was a series of bangs, now. They were kicking and striking the door. He was not a fighter. His father was a good man but could wield nothing besides a pitchfork. His mother was stout but not prepared to defend her family from a troop of deadly animals. There would be no hope for them if the enemies made it inside. Was this the last time he would see his family alive? Would his bloodline be ended in a matter of seconds? Had he already taken his final breath?
There was an explosion outside, and he risked making a turn to see what had happened. It was the tavern. Something had smashed into one corner of the building, spraying wood and bricks everywhere. Time did not stand still the way people often described it, but what had once been a successful business almost instantly became a ruin. As the dust settled, he could see a young woman--who had probably been standing inside the other half of the building--rushing with all possible speed over the pile of rubble. He had seen her around town before but could not remember her name; she was the daughter of the odd woman whom everyone gossiped about, a fair girl with freckles and dirty-blonde hair. She had made it to the end of the rubble pile when one of the fiends revealed himself not twenty feet behind her. His head could be seen poking out above the dust and smoke, and his eyes were facing her back. Then Rivlo saw the creature pull out a bow and nock an arrow. The girl turned toward her foe, slowly. She may have been the one speaking and arguing confidently earlier, but now there was a sorrow, a defeat in her eyes. She knew what all the villagers had come to know: that there was no chance for mercy, that conversation was out of the question, and that death was the only possible outcome.
A young man no older than the girl suddenly dashed into view, his footfalls upon the grass so quiet that he remained hidden from all but the girl and Rivlo. In half a second a bow was in his hands, and he aimed it not at the girl but at the creature. Rivlo was not sure how the boy planned on taking down his target. There was still a haze of dust and smoke, and there was the sound of townspeople screaming and the din of collapsing homes and the pat-pat of heavy boots swarming the ground nearby. He would be amazed if even a trained soldier could focus in such chaos. But before the fiend could fell the girl, the boy released an arrow between two leaning pieces of wall, through the dust, and into the head of his enemy. The force of the strike knocked the creature to the side, causing its arrow to fire uselessly into a wall to the girl's left.
The group of fiends that had very likely been another kick or two from downing Rivlo's front door headed toward the commotion. What they encountered were not two frightened teenagers, but two warriors prepared to defend their town. The girl lifted a sword from a corpse and used it to slay two of the approaching enemies, and the boy dropped the third with another arrow.
It was a long time before Rivlo learned the names of the two warriors who had saved his life. It was due to their efforts that he and his family were among the few survivors of the Attack on Armus Village.